英語一和英語二的短文寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一樣，主要是以下四個(gè)原則：語言準(zhǔn)確、組織連貫、內(nèi)容完整、語言多樣。其中語言多樣是最為重要的，所以在寫作的時(shí)候也需要進(jìn)行詞匯和句式上的升級(jí)。英語一是漫畫作文展示的要么是社會(huì)現(xiàn)象要么是好的品質(zhì)。但無論屬于哪種情況，我們都可以采用經(jīng)典的三段結(jié)構(gòu)來寫，分別是圖畫描述段、寓意闡釋段和個(gè)人總結(jié)段。另外根據(jù)歷年的考題，試卷會(huì)考一幅圖、寓意相反或相似的兩幅圖。

　　第一段：圖畫描述段

　　一幅圖

　　As is vividly depicted in the simple but educational photo, 整體描寫, which successfully captures our eyes. After a closer watch, it is not difficult to find that細(xì)節(jié)描寫. Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　兩幅圖相反

　　As is vividly depicted in the first photo,整體描寫, which successfully captures our eyes. On the contrary, the second picture describes that細(xì)節(jié)描寫, finally completing the contrast of the two pictures. Apparently, what the two drawings have subtly conveyed by their striking contrast is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　兩幅圖相似

　　As is vividly depicted in the first photo,整體描寫, which successfully captures our eyes. In the same way, the second picture describes that細(xì)節(jié)描寫, finally completing the comparison of the two pictures. Apparently, what the two drawings have subtly conveyed by their analogy is supposed to be given further analysis.

　　第二段：寓意闡釋段

　　社會(huì)問題

　　Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the problem conveyed in the picture, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. On the top of list is that +原因一. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is universally admitted that +原因二.

　　共性原因多是經(jīng)濟(jì)、法律、認(rèn)知等原因，以下語言可作為參考。

　　經(jīng)濟(jì)：Any behavior has profound economic motivations, and so does the performance of the character in the drawing.

　　法律：The current state of the affair depicted by the drawer may have been encouraged, though not justified, by the lack of legal penalty.

　　認(rèn)知：The general public have failed to realize the importance of……and a big part of their attention has been distracted by the so-called “great events”.

　　教育：Our education tends to stress test-taking and mechanical learning over the ability to confront realistic problems, including ……抽象品質(zhì)

　　What the drawer conveyed in the picture can be clearly and accurately summarized as following: ……plays a vital role in our daily life. To begin with, It goes without saying that anyone who is in possession of the quality of ……will be optimistic facing the troubles, and be likely to overcome the obstacles of life and achieve their destination. In addition, the quality will facilitate the growth of the economy and make it the winner in the competitive world.

　　第三段：個(gè)人總結(jié)段

　　社會(huì)問題

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to reverse this evil trend. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job.Only in this way can we resolve this problem and embrace a bright future.

　　抽象品質(zhì)

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to carry forward the quality. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of +抽象品質(zhì)and embrace a bright future.